Girl head

Girl head lined with coils, shaded and coloured with a German Evolution.

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Please excuse the crappy photo quality, both cameras are broken and these are all iphone pics.

Lines are clean, composition looks good. I would have to see a healed pic to make any nit picky remarks. But I imagine it will hold up just fine. Could maybe use some more contrast, but overall a very clean nice piece. Good job!

Thanks very much. The line work and the face/hair are healed, but the deer, roses and clouds are fresh.

Looks good to me; nice lines and some very clean shading although to my mind, a little black wouldn't go amiss especially in the flowers/leaves although that's a purely personal thing.