Pencil work Pilots

[Magnu]

A couple of recent pieces that were inspired by Joe Capobianco flash

[evlink2006]

pretty cool. The anatomy on the right one is way out of whack tho. Looks like 2 different faces stuck together.

[Sage Oz]

Pretty cool! Really good depth and shading. The one on the right has some pretty uneven eyes, but hey so does Shannon Dougherty ,'-)


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[Magnu]

Thanks for the feedback folks
I've just checked the reference I used for the face and it is spot on. I think I may add some more hair just to the right of the left eye and trim back the earpiece on the left as it sticks out a bit far

[evlink2006]

can you post the reference please?

[Magnu]

Here you go

[Sage Oz]

Wow she does have hella uneven eyes
lol


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[evlink2006]

ok I see a couple things that are throwing it off. They are small but they really mess with things. In the photo it looks like she is looking at the camera in your sketch she is looking off to our left. The curl of the top lip is a bit to dramatic in your drawing and you have the back teeth arching down when they should go straight back(hope that made sense). Tie those things with the cigar that doesn't belong, you didn't make any allowance for the shape of the cigar on the lips etc, and it throws the whole image off.

If there was just one of these I don't think it would have mattered so much but pile them all together...

Oh and the ear muff parts of the helmet thing are out of plane. The one on our left is either too low or too far forward compared to the plane established by the goggles and brim of the helmet.

[Magnu]

Cheers for the constructive critic
I think the center line of the helmet could do with being moved just a fraction to the left as well. I'll try and make some changes to it when I get the chance and if not will start from scratch and redo it