overall I like the tat. It does need more of an arch where the bridge of the nose meets the forehead. kinda just goes straight up. the hairlooks a lil unfinished. the shading looks a lil choppy on the neck. also, doesn't seem to be any blending in the transition of color (from red to orange to yellow) at the top of the piece. all fixable issues. nice concept though. jmho.